Comments on: How Can I Improve my outline for Spousal Abuse? http://www.menagainstrape.org/abuse-against-women/how-can-i-improve-my-outline-for-spousal-abuse Tue, 07 Feb 2012 09:22:59 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: obd http://www.menagainstrape.org/abuse-against-women/how-can-i-improve-my-outline-for-spousal-abuse/comment-page-1#comment-3809 obd Fri, 05 Mar 2010 05:23:59 +0000 http://www.menagainstrape.org/abuse-against-women/how-can-i-improve-my-outline-for-spousal-abuse#comment-3809 Maybe add effects on children and other family members.<br><b>References : </b><br> Maybe add effects on children and other family members.
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]]> By: jeepmom0508 http://www.menagainstrape.org/abuse-against-women/how-can-i-improve-my-outline-for-spousal-abuse/comment-page-1#comment-3808 jeepmom0508 Fri, 05 Mar 2010 04:44:59 +0000 http://www.menagainstrape.org/abuse-against-women/how-can-i-improve-my-outline-for-spousal-abuse#comment-3808 Firstly, a flowery design does NOT belong anywhere on a school-based or professional paper, nor do the brackets you used which are used for math, not english. Secondly, you have a topic listed twice "Spousal Abuse Against Women". Try something such as this: Introduction: Spousal Abuse against Women 1.) Spousal Abuse Statistics a.) How prevalent is spousal abuse? b.) How many women are actively seeking help? 2.) Living with Spousal Abuse a.) Effects on women b.) Effects on children c.) Effects on community 3.) Getting Help b.) When to get help a.) Resources available 4.) Conclusion Summary Attention to detail goes a long way in improving your writing. It will certainly show, in your finished product, whether you took the time and put effort into your paper. Hope that helps<br><b>References : </b><br> Firstly, a flowery design does NOT belong anywhere on a school-based or professional paper, nor do the brackets you used which are used for math, not english. Secondly, you have a topic listed twice "Spousal Abuse Against Women". Try something such as this:

Introduction:
Spousal Abuse against Women

1.) Spousal Abuse Statistics
a.) How prevalent is spousal abuse?
b.) How many women are actively seeking help?

2.) Living with Spousal Abuse
a.) Effects on women
b.) Effects on children
c.) Effects on community

3.) Getting Help
b.) When to get help
a.) Resources available

4.) Conclusion Summary

Attention to detail goes a long way in improving your writing. It will certainly show, in your finished product, whether you took the time and put effort into your paper.

Hope that helps
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]]> By: Casperia http://www.menagainstrape.org/abuse-against-women/how-can-i-improve-my-outline-for-spousal-abuse/comment-page-1#comment-3807 Casperia Fri, 05 Mar 2010 03:55:59 +0000 http://www.menagainstrape.org/abuse-against-women/how-can-i-improve-my-outline-for-spousal-abuse#comment-3807 After Beginning Signs of Spousal Abuse have a part on different forms of abuse, ie: physical, verbal, mental III. change to Spousal Abuse against Men (typo) IV. in Living with Abuse are you going to address pity for what caused the person to be this way versus the abused person's personal rights? where/when do you draw the line? Great topic! In getting help, are you going to list specific local resources and national hot line numbers, even the police numbers?<br><b>References : </b><br> After Beginning Signs of Spousal Abuse have a part on different forms of abuse, ie: physical, verbal, mental

III. change to Spousal Abuse against Men (typo)

IV. in Living with Abuse are you going to address pity for what caused the person to be this way versus the abused person’s personal rights? where/when do you draw the line?

Great topic! In getting help, are you going to list specific local resources and national hot line numbers, even the police numbers?
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