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I need further assistance with my research paper. What can I eliminate or revise? Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated

~* Outline*~
I.} Beginning Signs of Spousal Abuse

II.} Spousal Abuse against Women

III.} Spousal Abuse against women

IV.} Living with Abuse

V.} Getting Help

Thanx in advanced
sorry I made a typo….

III.} Spousal Abuse Against Men

Firstly, a flowery design does NOT belong anywhere on a school-based or professional paper, nor do the brackets you used which are used for math, not english. Secondly, you have a topic listed twice "Spousal Abuse Against Women". Try something such as this:

Introduction:
Spousal Abuse against Women

1.) Spousal Abuse Statistics
a.) How prevalent is spousal abuse?
b.) How many women are actively seeking help?

2.) Living with Spousal Abuse
a.) Effects on women
b.) Effects on children
c.) Effects on community

3.) Getting Help
b.) When to get help
a.) Resources available

4.) Conclusion Summary

Attention to detail goes a long way in improving your writing. It will certainly show, in your finished product, whether you took the time and put effort into your paper.

Hope that helps

3 Responses

1. Casperia Says:
   March 4th, 2010 at 10:55 pm

   After Beginning Signs of Spousal Abuse have a part on different forms of abuse, ie: physical, verbal, mental

   III. change to Spousal Abuse against Men (typo)

   IV. in Living with Abuse are you going to address pity for what caused the person to be this way versus the abused person’s personal rights? where/when do you draw the line?

   Great topic! In getting help, are you going to list specific local resources and national hot line numbers, even the police numbers?
   References :

2. jeepmom0508 Says:
   March 4th, 2010 at 11:44 pm

   Firstly, a flowery design does NOT belong anywhere on a school-based or professional paper, nor do the brackets you used which are used for math, not english. Secondly, you have a topic listed twice "Spousal Abuse Against Women". Try something such as this:

   Introduction:
   Spousal Abuse against Women

   1.) Spousal Abuse Statistics
   a.) How prevalent is spousal abuse?
   b.) How many women are actively seeking help?

   2.) Living with Spousal Abuse
   a.) Effects on women
   b.) Effects on children
   c.) Effects on community

   3.) Getting Help
   b.) When to get help
   a.) Resources available

   4.) Conclusion Summary

   Attention to detail goes a long way in improving your writing. It will certainly show, in your finished product, whether you took the time and put effort into your paper.

   Hope that helps
   References :

3. obd Says:
   March 5th, 2010 at 12:23 am

   Maybe add effects on children and other family members.
   References :

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